Seeking a beta reader

[pj1228]

I've completed the fourth installment of the Relationships series (One Loss Too Many, One Death Too Many, One Lover Too Many) and need a beta reader. Mainly for grammar and punctuation.

It's about 10,000 words and mature subject matter. It may be helpful, but not necessary, if the beta reader is familiar with the previous stories and UF-inclined.

Anyone?

Comments

[thefruitbat]

I'd love to, but since I'm not a native speaker and make quite a lot of mistakes in this department, that wouldn't be any real help. ;)
Just wanted to express my happiness about a new story from you. Looking forward to reading it. :)

[pj1228]

Thank you! So far nobody else volunteered. I might just post it unread and let the readers point out any flaws.

[thefruitbat]

It was a delightful read. Looks like Natalie still has a lot to learn, and that Nick is way better at teaching Archaeology than vampire basic skills... I hope you'll continue the series. :)

As to your initial request in this post: I only noticed that you used "lob-sided" instead of "lopsided" in the beginning of the story.

[pj1228]

Thank you, I'm glad you like the story. And thanks for pointing out the spelling error. I've fixed it.

I enjoy your work in progress as well, especially chapter 8. I'm looking forward to seeing how it continues.

[thefruitbat]

Thank you, I always appreciate feedback.
Right now, I'm trying to decide how dark I want to let the story end. Next chapters might take a while, life keeps throwing things at me lately. But the story won't be abandoned, and there are a few others I still need to finish.